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I'll drown my sorrows in your dialogue,
The sapphire lining to my cloud.
Your whisper scares away the dark,
And these words can't describe how I feel but,
I feel like Jack Johnson's guitar when I'm with you.

I have this ideology
That time should freeze when you're here.
Just so a minute lasts an eon.

I want to get lost in your maze of a mind,
And fall asleep in your arms.

I hope that you'll dream of me tonight,
Because I know that I will dream of you.
And maybe we'll meet.

They're called dreams for a reason.
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Another old poem I found. I'm not too sure about it.

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:iconpaintwithmyblood:
First and last sentences are my most super duper favouritists

But i love it all

It's like my thoughts put on a page, that's not mine

YOUR dialogue is just lovely jubbley

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Thankyou dear :)
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:D

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:iconthe-mirrorball-man:
Well, there are a couple of things here and there that are borderline cliches, but it's still pretty good. The last line is a killer.

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I love it ESPECIALLY the cliches. One of your best. Faved of course.

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69tea - putting words in a certain order to create a certain effect or say something. They say it's called poetry, but they talk a lot.
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Thanks a lot. Yeah I've gotta say I don't think it's one of my best, but I was just flicking through my old notebooks cos I've been having a bit of writer's block and saw I hadn't uploaded it. Cheers.

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I don't get why you like the cliches, boy.
Are you sarcasming me, Jackson?

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No I genuinly like them because everyone can relate to them. Seriously I'm not being sarcastic I like them.

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69tea - putting words in a certain order to create a certain effect or say something. They say it's called poetry, but they talk a lot.
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Thanks Jackson :)

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