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A smile and a wave,
Do I know you?
I can see you slither, but I can't see you slip.
Not yet.

Invitation for others,
Assumptions for you.
See you there?
I really [don't] want you to come.

Why didn't you say it straight?
A drooling dog.
A rabid animal.
Seminal leech.
Aphrodisiac tic.

He'll keep away from the stuff,
Watching almost-innocents drain it.
Watching it hit.
Drooling.
Spewing.

Contemplation of locked doors
And cleaning products.

We could scrub and scrub his conscience,
But the stain is a part of him.

It's getting late, or early.
Only he can tell.
Push, lock, slide in the digits.

She cares. She writhes.
And the skin meets the stain.
Whimper and push -
Open lock.
Downstairs.

She approaches, unclean.
Unsober. Unsure.

This tic is a tough one to remove.
Grab the not-so-empty threats,
Grab the footwear.
Get the fuck out.

"Oh, but it's one in the morning."

Oh, but you can walk.
Oh, but you can catch a cab.
Oh, but you have no money.

Get the fuck out.

The leech has left the building,
I hate to say I told you so.
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:iconpaintwithmyblood:
I don\'t actually get it....but that\'s cos i\'m a stupid little pumpkin pie....

BUT it\'s safe to say \'i rather like the way you are so clever with your words\'

Oui??

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:iconpaintwithmyblood:
Why the hell are there loads of / in that other comment........what was i doing!!!

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:iconpunkerbunker:
thankyou.
It's about a certain manipulative wanker who you know vaguely and what he did at a certain party he wasn't invited to to a certain friend of mine which made me and a certain person make it it certain he got the fuck out the house before he certainly ruined it further. :)

Thanks again.
xx

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Like it! Its got a very disctinctive rhythm to it, or maybe thats just how i was reading it. (to the tune of monkey magic theme tune)
And hey, before you get too cocky, i throw the shoes in this relationship.
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Haha. Nice one.
It's not really sposed to have a theme tune but thanks for being imaginitive, Conzoroyz.

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:iconpaintwithmyblood:
Uh ohs =[

BUT on a nicer note that doesn't make me cry, even your comments sound sparkly and special!!!!!

What is with your amazing natural ability to make things sounds poetic!!!

You special little jelly bean you!!!!! :donut:

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:iconpunkerbunker:
Haha. Thanks. :)
That made me smile, that did.

xx

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This is excellent josh. in fact it's so good I'll have to fav it.

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69tea - putting words in a certain order to create a certain effect or say something. They say it's called poetry, but they talk a lot.
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Why thank you, Sammyboy.

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